Deciding to change

Although I have received positive feedback from pretty much all of the people I have shown my rough cut to, I still think that I need to change it. At the moment, I think that the opening of my film is a little bit monotonous. It doesn't make as much of an impact that I hoped for and I'm not sure that I like what has been said in the voice over - i.e. I'm not sure if I have given too much away. I think I am going to re-write the script and re-do the voiceover as well as play around with the order of shots to try and create a more interesting and memorable piece of film.